Student Writing Which Exceeds Standard
Friendship is a gift that we all have
Coming to you in different ways
Friendship is like an ever blooming flower
With petals of rage and smiles
Friendship is like a piece of candy
With sweet and sour bits
Friendship is like a painting
Expressed with colorful feelings
Friendship is something that comes and goes
So when it arrives never lose hold
On the outside you look like a meteor falling to earth.
You feel like a slippery floor inside.
When I peel you, you sound like paper that is ripping.
When I slice you, you sound like a person chopping wood.
Inside you look like the earths core fiery hot inside.
On the outside you feel like skin that has tiny little hairs on them.
You smell like a tropical island fruit.
You taste like a sweet apple and a sour apple mixed together.
Tell me peach, why do you look so sweet but you taste so sour?
Friendship is a gift everyone has,
It is the sweetness of a candy!
Friendship is a painting with beautiful colors,
It has colorful feelings,
Friendship is loyalty, never revenge,
It is honesty, not a lie,
It is an ever blooming flower,
Friendship is a secret everyone has!
Friendship is like an ever blooming flower,
That no one wants to die,
Friendship is its own family,
Thatís never big enough,
Itís a love hate situation,
That no one wants to end,
Friendship is an everlasting rainbow,
With a pot of cold at the end,
Friendship is a seed,
That never stops growing,
Friendship is something,
You donít want to let go of.